Audience Presentation Review

Group 1 "The Student Express"
I missed this presentation.

Group 2 "Creating a Healthier Campus"
Good: This was a great idea. You gave good examples of how this has been done at other universities.
To be improved: Introducing the next topic and person would create smoother transitions.

Group 3 "Blue & White: Cougar Line"
Good: Great presentation skills keeping audience engaged and listening. 
To be improved: Your plan seemed to add on to the original idea instead of explaining how it would be executed.

Group 5 "Big O Tires Orem" 
Good: This idea benefited the client but more importantly you explained well how it would benefit your audience (Big O Tires).
To be improved: Including how to get the van and set it up distracted from your main idea (to allow clients to schedule an appointment through an app).  Simplicity and depth is better than breadth.

Group 4 "SmartEat" 
I missed this presentation

Group 6 "Biodiesel Fuel" 
Good: You demonstrated a lot of background knowledge about this problem.
To be improved: It would have been beneficial to focus in on one problem and solution and not to look at so much of the industry at once.

Group 7 "BYU Transfer Student Scholarship Project"
Good: Your personal experiences with the problem made you credible and brought seriousness and value to addressing this issue.
To be improved: It took me a minute to understand how long someone had to wait and why to get a scholarship. Including explanatory images would have helped.

Group 9 "Password Security" 
Good: Using the "How strong is my password?" website was dynamic and got your point across quickly. Awesome!
To be improved: It would have helped to know exactly who your target audience was.