Audience Presentation Review

"The Student Express" -- Group 1
Good: I really enjoyed your very detailed project plan.
What can be improved: there was a lot of flipping through the slides just to show a picture; practice will help that to improve!

"Creating a Healthier Campus" -- Group 2
Good: Beautiful images fro what you want the future building to look like, great vision and ideas.
What can be improved: Great topic, very popular among students, but your data/reasoning is directed at a very specific audience (and I found myself asking who is your audience).

"Blue & White: Cougar Line" -- Group 3
Good: Great audience involvement. The slide with "5.86 dollars" is a great attention getter.
What can be improved: No plan for a high volume of students was included, or at least how to manage long lines.

"Big O Tires Orem" -- Group 5
Good: Really innovative and original idea, especially the development of an application.
What can be improved: What other tools and supplies do you nee din order to provide these services and more? Is a large van sufficient?

"SmartEat" -- Group 4
Good: The application accessibility is very convenient to use.
What can be improved: Your transitions were a little rough, you could have helped each other to move smoothly through the presentation.

"Biodiesel Fuel" -- Group 6
Good: Each presenter was very knowledgeable of the topic.
What can be improved: The problems and solutions section was a little too long and confusing (but it was brought together well by the project plan).

"BYU Transfer Student Scholarship Project" -- Group 7
Good: I really liked your purpose statement of bringing unity to the campus.
What can be improved: More statistical information would be useful to show the authenticity of this issue.

"Password Security" -- Group 9
Good: Very entertaining presentation, great job involving the audience.
What can be improved: The presentation lacked several important section headings.