Proposal Presentations Review

Group 1:
-Great at explaining intricate details, made it easy to follow
-You could try to have more creative headers than "introduction," "project plan," etc.

Group 2:
-Very convincing argument with thorough arguments.
-Transitions could be smoothed out with figuring out technical aspects of the presentation

Group 3:
-Great engaging introduction.
-There was a lot of information on the slides. Too many bullet points for the audience to read (or not read).

Group 5:
-Simple visuals were nice
-There was a long time on one slide. Maybe you could break up information into more slides?

Group 4:
-Great attention grabbers!
-You could switch between presenters more often to make it more balanced

Group 7:
-Great visuals and interaction with the visuals
-Could have more energy while presenting to help keep people's attention through all the information

Group 8:
-Fantastic personal stories made the argument very convincing
-Long sentences are too much on a slide.

Group 9:
-Fun demo in going to the actual website. It grabbed my attention AND convinced me!
-Could have dressed more professionally? (It was great. Hard to find places for improvement.)